The Quote

While cruising through some submission guidelines to a large publisher they asked-  “What’s the standout line in your book?”

Do you know yours?  It can be from any character, so long as it draws emotion and/or really rings true to the reader.  It’s that line that a random stranger can say and you automatically know what book they’re talking about.  Here are some good ones-

“And so the lion fell in love with the lamb.”

“The boy that lived.”

“Sons of Adam and daughters of Eve.”

Lol. I’m starting to see a pattern with the quotes that pop into my head.  Think I read a lot of YA?  Yeah…  Did you get any of these?  One is Twilight, two is Harry Potter, and three is The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe.

I read on a sign in front of the doughnut shop the other day “People doubt their beliefs, but believe their doubts.”  I loved this quote.  It rang true to me.  I almost want to steal it.  I can see my hero standing in the driving rain, holding firm his ground.  He shouts to his lady love as she walks away from him, dejected and broken-

“Some people doubt their beliefs, but believe their doubts, Cami.”  His chest heaved in his soaked through white button-up.  Blond hair clung to his face. “I never thought you would be one of those people.  I know the truth and I’m not backing down.”  Cami’s  muscles went rigid.  The clack of her heels on the wet pavement silenced as she turned around.  He held his hand out to her over the sleek black top.  “What you’ve experienced is just a bump in the road, baby.  We can get through it.  Let me remind you why you believed in those things.”

Sigh… I’m enjoying the romance genre lately.  Anyway, if your characters don’t give you a great line look online for a great
quote.  You can even borrow one from a classic movie.  Just remember to give credit where credit is due!

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If You’re Not Published…

If you’re not published can you still call yourself a writer? Or better yet, an author?

Here are a few examples that may set your mind at ease.  If you are writing daily, then yes.  And I’m not talking about journaling.  Many people journal, but they don’t go around claiming to be “writers.”  I have time set aside every morning to write.  And a couple more in the evening.  When company is hanging on the bell I can literally say “I need to go to work.”  Because that’s what it is.

Join writer’s groups and critique groups.  You think you’re good.  I know you do.  You might even be very talented.  But believe me, nothing is more humbling than joining a group and hearing directly from published authors what works and what doesn’t. These are people who are talented as well.  But you have to know how the writing world works to get through the iron curtain.

Enter contests.  If you can’t get published then start entering contests.  At least if you place you can finally call yourself an “Award Winning Author.”  It will boost your confidence.  And if you are swimming in rejections then that’s a boost you need.  And you never know what publishers or agents are judging your manuscripts.

Make connections.  Start a Facebook page, blog or twitter.  Better yet, do all three.  You don’t have to be on every day, though it helps, but at least you are out there and active.

If you’ve done these things then you can proudly proclaim yourself as a working writer.  Just remember to bounce back when you get knocked down.  Believe me, all those published authors have been there.  But they kept pushing through!

Keep writing friends!

 

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Plot, Your Backbone

This is something that keeps coming up. Plot. It’s a simple word.  Yet, when writing a synopsis or query after the several thousand words it may become lost to the author.

Plot has been presented to me in three questions: What does your character want?  What’s in their way to stop them? How do they overcome it?  Those are the three simple little questions agents and publishers want answered in your queries.  But, by the time you’ve reached the end your character will be more well-rounded. There will probably be more than one goal.  There are the inner goals; Matilda wants to find love. And the outer goals; Matilda’s dream is to make the largest hot fudge brownie sundae in the world. (I’m on a diet, give me a break!) In the middle east. Then she’ll win that treasure that will help pay the ransom for her kidnapped chihuahua.

Which goal is a little more driving?  The love or fulfilling her dream in a war-torn area so she can save her beloved pet?  Okay, maybe that’s a smidge overboard… But I do tend to focus more on the love (because those are the scenes I pour over) than the big huge elephant in the room.  Or tiny yapping chihuahua, whatever.

The best way to get around that inner and outer goal conflict? Write a little one page cheat sheet of where you expect your story to go.

What does the character want?  To create her dream dessert and save her pillaged pup.

What’s in her way?  The middle east and lack of money.

What helps her overcome it?  She’s unknowingly fallen in love with her dog’s kidnapper, the prince of the land. She doesn’t win, but she becomes a princess and gets the dog back anyway.  The prince names a day after her mountainous dessert and celebrates it yearly.

Now I can begin writing my tale.  Well, maybe not. But hopefully you get the hint. I think I finally have.

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The View From My Desk

  The view from my desk is nothing special.  It is placed in the corner and the computer is almost overwhelmed with stacks of papers, drawings, old manuscripts and bills.  It’s rather pathetic.  I’d much rather be sitting outside, writing in the sun.  But the weather hasn’t been very accommodating lately.

  Just to the left of my desk is a window. And if I look up I have a view of a tree nestled right against the house.  Through its sparse branches I see a wooden fence met by green grass. And beyond that? Rooftops. Yeah, boring.

  Three days ago I found myself looking at bird feeders. I bought a simple brown one and hung it in the tree.  Today, while I waited for my computer to boot up, I twisted the blinds covering the window.  To my joy there was a bird at the new feeder.  Before I knew it the tree was bustling with finches, robins, and sparrows.

  Is it distracting? Somewhat. But I find that my mind needs to take a break from it’s editing process much more often than the creative one of writing. These little guys are giving me just that.  I’ve brought life and action to my empty tree with a simple, cheap bird feeder. What simple little thing could you add that will bring spice to your life, or manuscript?  Perhaps a new haircut or purse?  Or on the fiction side how about a wardrobe malfunction, or a jealous best friend? It’s something small that could lead to something bigger. Happy Monday all!

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The Mask

  Have you ever written a character and didn’t feel like you knew him or her?  And, of course, that’s a problem. Because if you don’t know them then how can your reader connect to them?  One fun way to round out this character better is to put on their “mask.”  Pretend to be them for an interview.

  I might have already posted on this, but this is a lot more fun than filling out a questionnaire.  Have a friend ask you all kinds of crazy questions about what a person would want to know about another.  Like their favorite color, a moment in their life they wish they could change, or about their ex. What was the best moment of their life?  Where did they go to school?  Do they have a quarrel with any family members?  What are their hobbies, or their favorite dessert? You can even google interview questions to help you out.  By the end of your interview, once you’ve taken off the character mask, you’ll be able to meet a much more rounded out person.  Then you can weave those new elements into your storyline, creating a very life-like individual. Have fun!

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The Tea Ceremony to Kendo

  I returned yesterday from my trip to Seattle and Sakura Con.  Sakura Con is an anime convention dedicated to all things Japanese.  One of the things that I was surprised at was how many men there were at the tea ceremony.  Almost all of the participants on stage were men. There was only one woman.  The Japanese women took their time, slowly preparing the leaves, holding the sleeves of their kimonos as they poured the water, and then turning the tea cups respectfully before allowing the participators to drink.  Of course, by this time, all the participants legs were asleep from kneeling.

  The kendo demonstration was amazing in the fact that the instructor wanted the audience to see exactly the monotony of their practice.  From how to hold the sword (or bamboo shinias) to foot placement to counting.  Then it occurred to me that the culture, from men to women, focuses on detail.  Every movement has beauty in it. The delicacy, the repetition,  the study that goes into being either a servant of tea, or a sword master, is amazing.

  It makes me think, if they can find the beauty in fighting or in serving a cup of tea, where am I missing the beauty around me?  What boring and plain thing can I add details to that would bring beauty to it?

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Absent

I do often feel absent-minded, but the title refers to my absence to the blog. One week ago my beloved computer caught a virus.  Well, 34 of them, in one click.  It took awhile to get her put back together, but she’s up and running like a champ again!

So I wanted to say sorry for the absence. I may not be a daily blogger, but I try to get at least one out a week.  So what have I accomplished without the use of a computer for an entire week?  I’ve been writing low-tech.  A new short story spin-off has come to me recently.  My poor little purse notebook is almost full. Which means I have stuff that needs to be transferred over. 

I also did a little gardening.  And when I say a “little” I mean it. Six pansies. That’s it. Maybe more later, when it stops snowing.

And I’ve been madly crafting little mini top hats. I originally wanted to make one for my up-coming Sakura Con trip, so I started experimenting.  before I knew it I had requests!  Which always brings joy to an artist XD  Though I’ve finished three, I’ve yet to finish my own.  And I only have two days left. Guess I better get on it!

I hope during your absences from the world you are productive!

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The Spring Shows

  In Japan right now, the anime shows are starting new seasons.  Some are ending. Some are starting. And some are so long, like Bleach and Naruto, that they keep going.  I brood on weeks like this.  One of my favorite shows ended last week.  It was a romance called Kimi ni Tadoke.  The sexual tension for the two main characters had that tensile strength that was driving me mad.  Every week I would anxiously tune in to my 24 minute program dying to see if the two would realize their affections for each other. 

  And now there are all new shows.  Some are downright annoying. Some are crazy. And some are so pointless I have to turn them off.  But then there are those that leave me wondering, “What will happen next?”  And every once in a while there is one that has me hooked from the first episode.  I want to write like these rare episodes.  I want to grab my readers so quick and tight they can’t put that book down.  The one thing I’ve noticed about plots that grab me is the main characters all have secrets.  Only, they aren’t aware of them.  But because of it, their lives are completely turned up-side down.  Some of these secrets include a person being raised as someone they’re not, or a main character was born with a curse that makes others fearful, or another one has a parent that isn’t human. 

  But we never know this secret at the beginning.  We see their world completely changed by the end of the first episode (or chapter). Then we hold on to see how the character will handle the situation.  Along the way little hints are dropped about the secret that leaves you constantly guessing. And how will the love interest handle that secret?  There always has to be a touch or romance somewhere for me. 

  How about you?  What are your favorite books or shows?  Watch the first episode or read that first chapter again and find what it was that hooked you.  Then, write like that!

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Resting Body and Mind

  I just got a recharge on my imagination battery.  I went for a little get-away with my husband, who refused to let me talk about work.  But to me, work isn’t really work.  (well, maybe the editing part is)  But I love writing, so it never feels like work.  I found myself missing my computer, my office, and my writing music.  My imagination was only let loose at night while I wasn’t busy. 

  By the time I got back I had all this want to type away stored up.  And I’m enjoying it all the way.  I always have heard how good it is for you to take a break, but to completely remove yourself from your beloved computer will build up your drive like crazy! At least for me it did. 

  So if you’re stuck, take a break.  A real break.  Don’t allow yourself into your office or near your computer for a set time, or day, or days.  It’s the way the human mind works- you always want what  you can’t have!

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Children In Paranormal Tales

  I love a paranormal couple who I’ve suffered with, blushed with, and fell in love with.  But more than that, I love it when those couples have children.  Especially when they’re not supposed to be able to!  That’s the best stuff.  I crave it.  I beg for it.  And when I get it, I want one thing over all- amazing paranormal abilities to go along with the new bundle of joy!

  The crazier the abilities the better.  That will keep our beloved couple on their toes.  Like a young snake or spider when they bite; The child doesn’t know how to control that venom, and it pours out in more deadly quantities than an adult would dare venture.  Even better; make the ability something that the parent’s need in order to avoid certain death.  Make that child invaluable, not only for survival, but for the plot as well. 

  Of course no parent would dream of putting their child on the front lines of a horrific scene.  But, somehow that child knows they are the only hope.  And they appear when you least expect it.  Like a nuclear bomb they disperse the threat (with some casualties or affliction, naturally).  And when the dust settles… Well, you fill in the blanks.  Kids can be fun and unpredictable.  They can add a totally different spice to a dynamic relationship.

  While living “Happily Ever After” with Tall, dark and handsome is wonderful; living adventurously with a gifted paranormal child could be very endearing.  That child could pilot us to look forward to them being the lead in following books to come.

  This topic was inspired by Brook Ann, a critique partner of mine, and one gifted story-teller!  I hadn’t relized how I looked forward to “more” after the relationship until recently.  I always want a series.  If I love your characters I don’t want it to end.  And seeing them as parents helps us get to know them in a completely different light, and introduces us to a new little one to love as well.

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